Part Three

Part THREE


In a fit of desperation when we were in need of moving quickly I made an artistic contribution. Picking a photo and doing some slight editing to it, I sent it off to Erdy. My attempts to communicate as best I could through my limited artistic abilities (those are boats in the blue ocean) were I fear not the most helpful, but it helped move us slightly farther and the notes never stopped coming back from Erdy.

We soon found a style that began to speak to us as the art began to take shape and the writing reworked itself again. I began to receive more full sketches from Erdy that were directly focused and based around the scripts and with them building on the world already written. 

 


Part Two


 Part TWO
With me often in bed by 9pm and Erdy asleep by 4 AM, it was a tandem hand off. The script exists as evolutions from various writings that I would send off to Erdy every night before I went to bed, and then scanning over his notes in the AM.





The downside to working off the cuff with a story was the story never resting and constantly changing itself into another kind of tale, while the benefit outweighed those concerns due to neither of us having seen anything made in this way before. Where I began with St. George and his travels through Turkey shifted as we began seeing this as a personal narrative of Vlad’s.

Part One


Part ONE

It’s a strange and intense experience to make a short film. Choosing to make a film that surrounds Romania and Turkey in Los Angeles is a venture that isn’t guaranteed to yield something worthwhile. At first glance the story we selected is well saturated, but that was almost the appeal. Picking the Vlad Tepes story is guaranteed to bring attention, positive or negative, the story itself is electric and for centuries has carried a desire people have for this strange man.           
There was a desire, on our part, to make something unique that scratched a certain itch. It was building a bridge over the gulf of our ideas was what proved difficult. Each choice made is done through a friction we are forced to ride. The tension is not between one another but rather our ideas brought down into the harsh reality of our limited technological and financial resources. It became clear that an animation would be cheaper and more immediately achievable option.  
Our story was complicated from the start. Ideas that straddled distinct eras of history and regions of the world, we had to start narrowing down the ideas. It was an early decision that the idea had to be something we could create that was different and the way to do that was to approach a well-known idea in a new way. What is a more universally known story than Dracula? For years people have dug into what inspired the original novel but rarely had any delved into the actual torment of the man who originated the circumstance.
Rather than letting this film end up telling Vlad’s story like a studio would, we could see something in this story just below the surface that would take us to much more buried within.
 
We began, like most people, on Google; scrolling images of the landscapes that make up the area the story covered. Alongside dragging up images we liked we started to pull the images so I could immediately begin to write. The essential elements of this story we felt needed hitting were the rejection and expulsion from family, growing up in an alien world and a building resentment to see how all of this story helped make our character one of the most fascinating in human history.
Eventually an idea that didn’t last long ended up tying us down to a central focus of Vlad’s past. For weeks I felt like we were spinning wheels, as I would write a short bit or Erdy would bring sheets of his sketches--

But after each meeting the new batch of photos and new piles of writings pushed out what we came in with from the week before as a new part was thought up. Memories of trips Erdy took as a child to the region along with my reaction to it seeming like an unreal space lead to us wanting to spend most of our time in Turkey.

Far out of Kansas: Imaging Women Part One

Dorothy Stratten; beat by the Game.



Dorothy Stratten will forever be trapped in a limbo of sexualization, an ageless wrinkle free and constantly beaming face that puts in us the knowledge of a dark other existence: an image, an un-self. Dorothy Stratten’s death could be classified under man’s consuming ownership of her image, seeing her hollow and flat to be acquired or controlled for accessorizing lives.

Picked up at the checkout of Dairy Queen, by a man that swindled a girl on a smile (who’d torture, rape and kill her); a varied but similar rendition of stolen girls and their deaths, which followed, like either: Bob Dylan’s It’s All Over Now, Baby Blue or Joyce Carol Oates’ Where Are You Going, Where Have You Been?  Dorothy was swept out of a small life in Canada, to be brought to the steps of stardom by a man, Paul Snyder.

Proponents of hers and champions for her can’t help but assign Stratten the definition of her death: a romantic end, which made her. Peter Bogdonovich, who wrote The Killing of the Unicorn, chronicling the much of the last eighteen months of Stratten’s life, does nothing but paint her image as anything but sexual, which with the knowledge of it being a posthumous portrait, is irksome. If her greatest supporter puts her legacy to use through extreme sexual characterization, then the foreboding sinks in. When you realize Dorothy Stratten was going to be left continually off fitting into men’s hands: there was no end for her but what happened.

As of now there is no version of Dorothy Stratten’s story shown from any point of view but a mans (least of all Dorothy’s), which moves all moves the stories around themselves, putting them at the major points of her life, making those moments theirs: Playboy’s Life of Dorothy Stratten (Hugh Hefner), The Killing of the Unicorn (Peter Bogdonovich), Death of a Centerfold or Star 80 (each being Paul Snyder). Though her story is a tragedy that ends with her corpse, and maybe for that reason, no man can help putting themselves into the staring role of her story, coiling her and twisting the story around them and finally, absolving themselves the blame for her remains, which they skillfully help themselves to.

No doubt exists that Dorothy Stratten was beautiful in a rare way, as her appearance inspired a violent idealism that can be brought out in men and a resonating confusion from inside herself. A powerful and exportable American beauty made half in fantasy with the other half in Canada. Dorothy was the id reward buried (not so deep) in men and in being that, Stratten left men free of the nagging sight of sullen clouds overtaking her. Nor a suspicious guard that kept her from affability, easiness and engagement with the men of the world. A smile that allowed us to keep drawing from her boundless wells, a being that was nothing short of manifesting as she had been promised to us as: “ultimate genetic perfection.”

In many ways, Stratten embodied what every actor should have to: a draw for us, an etched beauty but something far more: inspiring and photogenic. Stratten’s path was unique however during her short career she suffered as many like her do, as a victim of legitimacy. Following Dorothy on her path would lead most to porn and prostitution but Stratten’s staggering sculpt brought her quick fame in photos, several films but rarely would she be seen as legitimate.

Stratten wasn’t a bad actress, never given the chance to grow and kept from being acknowledged as a career model (stemming from Dorothy’s arrival as tits and teeth) Dorothy excelled the little she appeared on screen, in ways so many actors can’t. So it stands that Dorothy Stratten’s biggest tragedy was her inability to see the legitimacy and purpose of her image; of pictures persuasive abilities from their specific stimuli and the power she could have controlling it.  

In Bogdonovich’s book The Killing of the Unicorn, the portrayal of Hugh Hefner as a sadist is too easy a shot; keeping to opportune vagueness that hardly make a believable villain. Hefner’s intentions, as claimed by Bogdanovich, only to “expose and possess” Stratten is not menacing but forgettable, while you are surrounded by the truly villainous text. Tossed around and treated like she had a player’s debt to a game she was dropped into the midst of, but no peer player in: Dorothy Stratten was born lost in a sea of users.  

The misogynistic text of The Killing of the Unicorn shows Bogdanovich being just as much a grown adolescent as Hefner but far less aware, successful or uniquely minded. Peter Bogdanovich is left seeming only obsessing over sex with Dorothy, remembering her sexuality as her most prominent feature.

Bogdonovich’s deluded belief of his own socially evolved state, leads to pages of poorly written brooding, name-dropping conquests with models (other than Dorothy) and an occupational biography; all written on a level of an amateur tabloid, reading like a high school contemplation. Bogdanovich paints Dorothy Stratten as a mute Cassandra, beautifully forelorn, leaving himself uncover Dorothy’s story for her and in doing so, claims her as his own: sealing his fate as the worse of two evils, between himself and Hefner.

“From time to time Dorothy had a faraway look that I didn’t understand…perhaps she felt as I did that we had touched the heavens, and she was afraid to speak lest the holy thing we had together be taken away from us.” – The Killing of the Unicorn: Dorothy Stratten 1960-1980, (1983) Peter Bogdanovich

The Killing of the Unicorn often reads like Dennis Reynolds: An Erotic Life, exaggerating and masking sociopathay or anything close to reality with the women he fills the pages with, the writing is self-delusional fantasy. Again we come back to the image that Stratten inspired out of men, the vacancy they put on her canvas: her image’s reflection to men, which led her directly to death.



Star 80 may be another male centered view of her story, but that cannot derail facts. A stellar script by Bob Fosse its director, a career performance by Eric Roberts and Mariel Hemingway’s lead during a peak in her career keep the machine of the film moving at a break neck pace without losing a beat. The talking heads that pass Dorothy’s story off from one to another aren’t introduced and depict regretful confessions, each not wanting to speak for long. The film summed up by Roger Ebert surrounds Roberts’ performance as “…filled up with so much reality, we feel horror…” and Eric Roberts truly excels at the portrayal of a vile human being, but Star 80 is much more than Roberts’ role.
The script is smarter than it wants credit for from its handling of the tensions between Stratten’s husband and Hugh Hefner to all of the interlopers in her life. We are always made aware of the tragedy’s end, but are brought on a quick and unrelenting narrative that doesn’t focus itself around Dorothy Stratten. Star 80 is probably the most humane depiction of Stratten’s slaughter because it centers on Roberts’ (or Paul Snyder’s) deterioration; instead of using Dorothy, Fosse makes us Paul Snyder.

We sit and grow enamored with the blonde, following Roberts’ first extension to her, until we watch him come to his end. Any argument that his character was underdeveloped is wrong because Paul Snider’s life was entirely Dorothy Stratten and her depiction in Star 80 is more dimensional than most female characters. In Star 80 we are watching the growth of a futile man’s fruitful creation, its derailment of him of as a man and his inadequate response.


Mariel Hemingway does an incredible job with the depiction of a complex, entangled, mentally and emotionally provoked young girl; the second time for Hemingway. Mariel Hemingway might hold the record for unparalleled performances by against anyone of her age range in English language film, rivaled only by Alicia Silverstone.

The depth in Hemingway’s performances cannot be understated. Her growth, beginning with Manhattan (four years earlier when she was eighteen) to Star 80, the fullness of her performances are unique and you have to parallel Hemingway and Stratten as young women: Dorothy’s mind and dimensional form given that Stratten died so young at twenty (while Star 80 filmed when Hemingway was twenty-two). Hemingway’s depiction of Dorothy Stratten hits every crucial point for a performance; of course the minimum requirement demands of the visual, which in the case of Stratten was vastly important as well the actor’s intellectual side that was able to master the doe innocence Stratten possessed and projected.

The rarity of these performances does not come from most actresses being incapable of this, but that in those roles their characters aren’t given the full expanse of a good female character. Dorothy Stratten’s life is tragic and fits a model that could be reduced to cliché (with respectful hesitation from it ending with her bloody corpse) but it also fights against the lessening of women’s roles in ‘men’s cinema’ to illustrate the immeasurably important roles of Beauty, Use and Death. Mariel Hemingway plays at us as the vulnerable girl, better than most and in doing is able to take what most would dismiss as stilted drama, and turn it into a stunning dramatic cinematic performance.

Expanding on the vagueness of the images that are set up, what is wrong with mirroring Playboy’s utilization of what men are attracted to in women and abstracting that to substantial drama? To provoke an insight or a feeling is part of the nature of art.

As a character, Stratten was shown in depth in ways most women are not on film. The danger for women comes, as the ultimate image of women is never drawn with substance, when a “good” female character is devoid of a subject’s substance and only left as a decorative object to the narrative.

Hemingway was able to show the distraction in Stratten’s mind between the life she was living and the person she was told she was. Hemingway built Stratten as a character whose nature attracted everyone to the shy girl. Dorothy Stratten is played as a victim of her life but Hemingway understood, and let it show, the wrenching nature of being indentured to a free society where her body was her work. Star 80 is an interesting study of a person owned by fame, which required of Hemingway a sexually layered performance.



Stratten was kept constantly distracted by Paul Snider, who swallowed her photo shoots, relationships, image, and life; which left Eric Roberts to fill the screen as well our minds.

Because Star 80 does not put Stratten directly at its center Hemingway was left to interpret significant moments of Stratten’s life off screen for the most part, while we faced the realities of Paul Snider, yet Stratten flowed naturally and Hemingway grew, hitting every mark. Stratten grows, Snyder doesn’t. She is a success, while he’s a failure. Paul Snyder was not meant to grow old so, in jealousy he took Dorothy Stratten with him.

Star 80 doesn’t seek to attach further meaning to the story beyond the dismaying acts. We’re not left to dwell on those she left behind: who or how she left them in whatever ended up happening to each. Fosse as a director never wallowed in the sappy but thrived in the presentation of weighted material as important drama.   



Playboy’s Totemic depictions of women are simple while complex. Its pictures, stylizations and synthetic-isms fit themselves directly into the basics of film and its female depictions. Not misogynistic necessarily because of their overt sexuality, but chauvinistic for their contemptuous nature.

Depiction of women is always chauvinistic when you have to depend on shallow displays, which are essential to a picture’s image. The question has to be asked is Playboy’s shallow depiction of women worse or more harmful overall than Bogdonovich’s selfish treatment of women disguised as honorific art.

 In film, picture-image is everything and Dorothy emanated exactly what the camera needed. Though haute couture never sought Dorothy for their flexural canvases, Dorothy Stratten would find legitimacy in pictures, with her born gift.

Restricting the sexual element of women’s characters to nothing or soporific attributes, leads only to stale characters and drama. This isn’t an argument of exclusive portrayals of women but rather an aspect to widen an already plain and ordinary depiction, that’s often so dull to the point of boredom.

Dorothy Stratten would star as the titular character in drive-in master William Sachs’ (Van Nuys Blvd., The Incredible Melting Man) sci-fi creation, Galaxina. In 1980, low budget cinema would had a landmark and Dorothy Stratten would shine at her at her best on the silver screen not used as a canvas but as a Totem (though in movies that never hurts). Galaxina was a natural flow into film for Dorothy and not as shallow as it would seem.



The late 1970’s yielded a crop of movies that designed for the drive in, would be the only American films to reach true levels of independence since 1938 and the rigorous codes that stuck up every cinema-house. Drive-in’s flourished from the 1950s onwards and these movies evolved to audiences’ demands for more features, all at an ease of cost of production, and with all new methods the medium of film was briefly reinvented.

Most of work veered to sexual audiences tastes. This new genre slightly resembled the Japanese genre pinku eigu (pink movie) that produced generations of unique films, which now stand beside Japan’s titan works. The similarities between genres were films that gained unique flavors that made their stories move steadily and knowingly jumped according to budgetary demands.

Van Nuys Blvd. the classic from 1979, directed by Galaxina’s William Sachs, included many of these form shifting requirements. Van Nuys Blvd. was a hit at drive-in’s and played nationally for a number of years, influencing a number of filmmakers and films that would come later like Richard Linklater’s Dazed and Confused: a tribute to the drive-in classic.

Van Nuys Blvd.’s interlude is a scene where the characters go to a disco and we are witness to a 4-minute dance number by a Kansas City cheerleading squad. The girls were not nude and the length of the sequence was determined by one of the film’s funders; the owner of a Kansas City Basketball team and their Cheer-squad, that he brought on tour and wanted to advertise.


Galaxina was a script that came to Dorothy Stratten during time of her reign at Playboy. A fun sci-fi yarns that like much of Sachs’ work is beyond the quality of competing peers. For its era, budget and story the film is diversely cast and reaches as a story in that way than most other film at its time wouldn’t even conceive of.

A genuinely strange spoof, space story and one I’d only be able to come across if written within the free reach of a comic book. A traveling police station’s intergalactic officials and criminals are each surprisingly well-defined characters for a film like this: darker and more explicit about the future of space travel than most other sci-fi’s of the time.



Don’t you know in space no one can hear your siren?!

Galaxina spoofs much of Star Wars and Alien, similar to what would be lampooned by Mel Brooks in Spaceballs, nearly a decade later. Like the majority of Sachs’ work the film tries for easily tapped responses of humor to action to sex, Galaxina is no different but at no point does it become stale, which is testament to its maker.








The whole film is fun and smartly put together, the dinner scene is a mix of Tom Jones and Alien and manages to be sneakily explicit about life at this place in time; jello that sustains a body for months, the full sweep of automation in the world, the unorganic nature of the future as well their conversation where they condemn man and machine relations.

As for the First Officer, what is a man supposed to do when trapped in with an ultimate, perfectly engineered being? The first officer’s lusting for Galaxina is never overwrought and always touched with humor without forgetting what it plainly says. Sachs uses Stratten only for her body but puts her in a vehicle that offered her the chance to play an interesting role and make a statement that reached beyond its text, even if Dorothy didn’t believe it herself.  

Playing a machine with feeling: sculpted by mans hands with the awing power of “emotion”, as its opening scroll tells us. Stratten plays her well, giving strongly symbolic role a needed solid base.

Galaxina acts like a robot while serving dinner, cleaning up after fights, or soldering her circuit board and most like a woman when chased down by men, seeking from her the forbidden. Protected by a separate built in mechanism the first officer kisses her that sends jolts of electricity through him.

Why build a machine with emotion and cut man off at the same time? The answer is that under its surface Galaxina is about the tragedy of women, and it rests itself on Dorothy Stratten and her performance.    

The use of Dorothy Stratten in the film can’t be made irrelevant or unseen by an audience because of the proximity of her death to the finishing of Galaxina’s shoot. The films resolution is a terrifying sequence of a man’s loss of love for his wife and the evil feeling that warps into burning hatred, along with her complete realization along with him.

Paul Snyder abducted Dorothy Stratten, taking her from her job, her friends and her family, in his last feeble attempt to control and keep her, which by that time had left Snyder with one option: to own Dorothy’s corpse.

Women killed by men, broken for the power of their image are ways for men gain control over autonomy. The dangers from women only seen through men’s eyes are the image that women establish in men’s heads. Women’s lives are turned into the “game” of society, never equals but collateral for life.

The power Dorothy Stratten had over men, the vision of herself, would be tested as she tried making something of her own, using only herself and under pressure it failed, leading her to death: an object in a world where men are the only subject.

Tragic as everything about Dorothy Stratten is, one is implored to ask is objectification of women’s image wrong, when men are objectified in equal measure with damages not too dissimilar? With Sly Stallone playing a conditioned muscle or Arnold Swarzenegger resembling a human being that none could become; these heroes don’t portray healthy models for boys, let alone give boys something to idolize in a healthy way. Men’s characters face reduction to totemic hero roles that set another generation up to fail in fitting their image.



Great female characters whose objectification was utilized intelligently are Adrienne Forrester portrayed by Alicia Silverstone in 1993’s The Crush, a teenage temptress girl who turns the life of Cary Elwes upside down, turning the man (justly, in many ways) into the victim for the entire film. One that also can’t be ignored the character, performance and depiction from Sue Lyon of Dolores Haze in the film Lolita, who, again, justly victimizes the men in her life as her way of retribution.


Women, when only seen through men’s eyes, are in a dangerous position as the man establishes an image for her and she could eventually, unknowingly, let dream deteriorate. Hugh Hefner never lets the image die. Hef’s proclamation that he “could never just be with one women again” according to Bogdonovich, is not Hefner being piggish but giving us an insight into how and why he affords the life he does.

Hefner doesn’t want to break the tricky glass and let the whole of a woman settle in and Hugh Hefner is afforded the ability to live in his pictures. In Playboy, the image that’s jagged into men’s minds from its pictures, the vision that Hefner doesn’t want to die, is one jammed with men’s vague romantics.

Dorothy is kept in a perpetual state, immortalized in compromise with commodity. And with this idea permeating society, women’s lives are held as entertainment and games, never to amount to equal consequence. If one would elaborate on the vague sketch we get of women, by inserting character bits into their roles they can build the archetype into something of depth.

To believe that an evolution in the dramatic depth of women’s work is to put women in the place of men, is to believe that women’s natural archetypes are too fragile to bend, too shallow to fill and have to be kept, protected, like precious porcelain: breakable gems, delicate unicorns.

At the end of her life, though her careers financial prospects were bright, Dorothy Stratten failed to find solace from her own perceived lack of legitimacy. Given scripts that relegated her characters to minimal roles, due to lack of sufficient character details inherent to belief that archetypes can’t bend. Dorothy was also kept out of serious circles of art and photography; for a start in the business that was seen as illegitimate and sleazy, Dorothy was discriminated into a corner.

Forced into her corner, she was alone. Surrounded by a confused world that wanted her as nothing but an insubstantial person and moneymaker, when Dorothy wanted much more. Dorothy Stratten reached out for the hand of the man who first took her off and saved her: Paul Snyder.   


This Disneyland…where people are the Games
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- Dorothy Stratten, poem (excerpt)



Aren’t there always hunters in pursuit of the unicorn, and others who stand by and watch and weep?

-Peter Bogdonovich, The Killing of the Unicorn

"Do you know, I always thought Unicorns were fabulous monsters, too? I never saw one alive before!' 'Well, now that we have seen each other,' said the Unicorn, 'if you'll believe in me, I'll believe in you."
-Lewis Carroll